Rudolphe Theophile Bosshard
This Flash Fiction Challenge was instigated by Patti Abbott at her blog, Pattinase. Armed with trepidation, I hereby volunteer my entry. I did go a few words over the 1,000 mark. I always do. You know how wordy I can be. It's just part of my nature.
Please check out the links on Patti's blog. There will be a large assortment of stories popping up today from the many fearless contributors who took up Patti's challenge. It was a lot of fun and I'm really hoping that this year will bring more Flash Fiction writing challenges.
The Man in the White Van
A white van pulled into the lot across the street and
parked in the spot opposite the view from my window. A tall man with a pony tail, sunglasses and a
scarred face jumped out. He slid open a side door and reached inside the van, muscled arms covered in tattoos - the reason for his sleeveless t-shirt.
I’m not a fan of tattoos.
The guy flipped open a cooler and took out his lunch which
he ate sitting in a beach chair, his back on the ocean view.
Why bother parking there, I wondered - just to ignore the scenery?
But maybe he’s seen it so many times before that the sight has been rendered meaningless. I pondered that for a few moments, watching the guy
drink from a container. He must be a native, I thought. After awhile I suppose they don’t notice the view anymore, it becomes part of the every day.
I wonder too if he knows I’m watching him. (I suppose I’m tired
of looking at the ocean myself.) What bright red hair he has. I've always thought the color strange.
He glanced up. Maybe he caught the sun reflecting off my binoculars.
I should be more cautious.
Hey guy, how else could I look into your van and see all the stuff
you’ve got tucked away? The clothing and surfboard I can understand. Even the motorbike. But what
about the fencing equipment? Isn’t that a little effete for someone who looks
like you? And how many boxes of old books do you have in there? I don’t
understand the taxidermy birds either. You’re not the type, my friend.
But the kicker is that Louis XIV gold leafed table. (I happen to know about furniture since once upon a time my
family had an antique gallery in the center of La Jolla
Now that I look closer, the table looks very like the one I have in the San Francisco
didn’t my nephew just take up fencing -
I couldn’t help giggling - in his latest attempt to impress me with his
And those birds might have come straight from my library.
Initially I’d thought this guy was just another homeless bum
- what with the clothing in the van and all. But now I’m not so sure. If this was a bum it was a pretty
The guy just didn’t look purposeless. Though what I meant by that I couldn’t say. I don't look like what I am either. (Much to my sister's eternal surprise, I might add.)
I sat back a bit. It was curious that the van was filled with so many familiar objects. A sudden thought: Had the house been robbed? If so, why would
a robber take a bunch of stuffed birds? Hard to cash in on them you’d think.
And why would he show up here in Southern
with the goods still in his van?
Unless my nephew sent him. Not that I would, for a moment, have
thought him capable of such elaborate machinations. But it is true that the
most complete lackluster dullard may be capable of the occasional surprise.
A sudden sneer on his face, the guy stood up, collapsed the beach chair and tossed it into the van. I was sure the sneer was intended for me. He then pulled one of those metal expanding ladders from the
van and grasping the ladder easily under one arm, crossed the street. Was he planning on
scaling the wall around the grounds? In the middle of the day?
Yes, so it would seem.
This character meant to climb up the side of the building and into my
room. I was sure of it.
Security hasn’t been the same since the notion of austerity took hold with the board of directors.
I began to sweat. Was there any point in pressing the alarm buzzer?
Then I heard the metallic clank of the ladder as it was shoved
against masonry three stories down.
Of course I should have expected this. Retribution.
I looked out the window and
saw the top of that red head. When he glanced up and smiled, I screamed. Couldn't help myself.
The door to my room was unlocked and thrown open, the doctor and nurse rushed in.
“He’s back!” I
shouted in a rush of breath.
“Look out the window.
He’s climbing up the side of the building. Right now.”
“No, no, Mr. Blair. Calm yourself.”
"He’s going to kill
“Your nephew is dead – remember? He perished with his mother in the fire, five years ago. You…uh, were there."
“No, you moron, I don’t mean my nephew. I mean the man he’s
hired to kill me. The man with the red hair."
“Your nephew had red hair, Mr. Blair. It was one of the
things you said at trial that you most hated about him. Remember?”
“Of course I remember.” Actually I didn’t.
“Then you know that there’s no one really coming to kill you.”
“Look for yourself if you don’t believe me.”
“Nurse,” said the doctor, “take a look for Mr. Blair’s sake."
The beefy guy rolled his eyes but walked over to the window
and glanced out. “Nobody out there, Doc.”
“What about the white van?” I asked, hysteria taking grip.
The nurse shrugged. “No white van anywhere that I can see.”
“Now, Mr. Blair,” said the doctor in an unctuous tone.
“It’s time for your medication. Please relax. All will be well. Nurse, hold him down." He flashed the hypodermic.
A white van pulled into the rear parking lot of the Sunset
Little Theater. Prop manager Joe Nolan climbed down from the driver's seat and tried the theater's back door - it was unlocked. That meant rehearsals had started.
He began unloading the van. Though he wasn’t supposed
to do the heavy lifting, he didn’t mind lending a hand when it was needed. Little
theater was like that – everyone pitched in. It was a good gig.
He burped. Lunch hadn't settled well. That was the last time he'd park by the loony-bin. Bad mojo coming off that place. He'd swear he heard somebody screaming.